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by Amber Grunte, age 17
Freedom is a right. It is not a privilege. It is not a privilege
because privileges are "given" to people. No one gives us our
freedom; we are born with it--ALL of us. Besides, who could possibly
be in such a position to "hand out" freedom like it was some kind of
reward for being "good". No one has that much authority--or at least
no one should.
Many feel that a society bound by no rules would be a society run
amok. People would run wildly through the streets burning, raping,
and pillaging everywhere they went. The idea is that government
exists to "help" its society "run smoothly". But there is an
underlying flaw here: the assumption that mankind is inherently evil.
People believe/ are led to believe that authority is necessary to
suppress our natural destructive tendencies; that we would be of harm
to ourselves and others without its guiding force. That if left to
our own devices, we would not make good choices.
Nothing could be further from the truth. Increased responsibility
is a result of increased personal freedom. It is not as if deep down
everyone is desperately aching to murder their neighbor, and the only
thing holding them back is the knowledge that they will be imprisoned
if they do. Instead, the more personal liberty an individual retains,
the more likely they are to do what is right. Because the more one
has to do in developing his/her own morals, the more they will want
to abide by them. If a person does something they know in their heart
is wrong (and humans are definitely born with this instinct), they
are no longer just "breaking the law", they are going against their
own conscience. And this suffering is much greater. Sure, some will
argue that there are in fact those who deep down are desperately
aching to murder their neighbor; but these people are the exception,
not the rule, and they need help.
For humans naturally are good--sure, we may have our faults--but
we do not need a higher authority to rule over our lives. Government
is actually a bit ironic here; by forcing laws upon us--most of which
we would naturally adhere to anyway--it is creating resentment among
its people, and defeating the purpose. An example is the minimum
drinking age: few young people I know just absolutely crave the taste
of a beer; yet it becomes appealing by being legally forbidden. Those
who drink become "cool" and "rebellious"--but more significantly many
die in drunken driving accidents, or suffer long-term effects like
kidney and liver disease, or become alcoholics, and no longer can
even choose for themselves whether or not to drink. The forbidden
fruit is always the sweetest; if alcohol had never become legally
controlled, it would not be an issue today. It is too bad the
government did not decide to prohibit vegetables and studying--teens
would be a lot better off, with a lot fewer problems.
Responsibility is not lost with increased freedom; the opposite is
true. The more control a person is allowed in managing their own
life, the more they will take it. Despite what some would have us
believe, we are good people capable of making good choices--we just
are not given the chance often enough.